Sunday 21 October 2012

The Black Hole


We watched this video clip and then wrote our own black hole narratives
Read the comments for different stories from our class



3 comments:

  1. Today Mrs. Cooper sent me to the photocopier to get a school newsletter, but it was not there, instead there was a black hole. When I looked into the black hole I could see the stars and a big flashing sign that said “WELCOME TO TEDDYBEAR JUNCTION”….I wonder what will happen next. I had no idea and then I jumped inside. Then the opening closed behind me and I fell to the ground. As I looked around small teddies started to crowd me. Something started to move underneath me, I wondered what it was and as I stood up I realized it was a teddy….I had landed on him. When I looked beside me I saw the sign and knew I was in “Teddy bear junction”. Next an old teddy came and gave me a hand up and said “hi my name is Dizzy, I will show you around our junction”. “Thank you, but I need to go home, is there any way out of this place to get back to the real world?” Dizzy bear says “yes there is, but this place is a secret!” he then gives me a great big ladder that reaches the stars. I can’t see the top off the hole and I ask him to make it appear for me to exit. “Ok then” said Dizzy “I will make a potion that will make you see the hole like we do, but just remember that this is our secret”. By Harrison Gillespie

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  2. Black hole

    Today Mrs Cooper sent me to the photocopier to get a photo of a car. But it was not a photo - it was a black dot. I put my cup on it. The cup fell through.
    I drove in my coupe to the racing club to steel the keys to a Evo. Then I went to the locked cupboard in my Mum’s room. I put my hand through the door. All my money was there. Then I went to the perfume shop
    and stole some perfume.
    But then I went to the cbay pool. The Café 11 was closed. So I stuck my hand
    through the drinks cabinet and got a
    V for free.
    By Harry B

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  3. On Friday Mrs Cooper sent me to the photocopier to get… a photo of the All blacks. Instead it was a big black hole! I put it on the bench. I leant on it. My arm went straight through it. I was amazed. I put the piece of paper on the wall. I put my arm through. I just felt wood. I took my arm out. I took the piece of paper off the wall. I looked behind the black hole. It had a magic star on the back. It was bright red. I took it off and I put the piece of paper on the wall and … It did not go through. I ripped it up and put it in the rubbish bin. Then the photo of the All Blacks came out on the photocopier and I ran back to class.


    By Caleb D

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